First off I’d like to acknowledge the effort you have put in. In the last six months I could see you are enthusiastic and have the desire to improve.
Looking at your report, I feel there are some areas you did well
Nonetheless there are areas you will need to pay attention to, specifically the language and the prose. Let’s go through some of them I have highlighted
I hope you found the walk through helpful. I’d like to suggest that each week, for a couple of months, we take some together for an hour to walk through your work. Take it as a coaching session where we work together to close some of the gaps we discussed earlier.
Would that be ok with you?"
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