Response: "Stephanie,

First off I’d like to acknowledge the effort you have put in. In the last six months I could see you are enthusiastic and have the desire to improve.

Looking at your report, I feel there are some areas you did well .

Nonetheless there are areas you will need to pay attention to, specifically the language and the prose. Let’s go through some of them I have highlighted .

I hope you found the walk through helpful. I’d like to suggest that each week, for a couple of months, we take some together for an hour to walk through your work. Take it as a coaching session where we work together to close some of the gaps we discussed earlier.

Would that be ok with you?"

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